To what extend are we influenced by media images?
It is generally agreed that media images are becoming an important and serious aspect of today's life .thousands of them are found every where and they are available to everybody. People absorb media images from television, magazines, internet, and newspaper or even on billboards and video games. Undoubtedly, media images are powerful because they affect our expectations, attitudes or even our social convention moreover, they have narrowed our notions since people use media frequently.(Sam Femanio and marck Nickerson, media &values magazine ,1999).thereby, what need to be awarded is that the most of our decisions, beliefs, and values are based on what we know for a fact and how we have put our trust on the mass media. However, we should know how media and its images really work. It is often argued that the mass media and its images have had negative on our life both in terms of the mentally and physically and also there has been a little discussion about whether they should be controlled or not. However, this essay will examine the influence of media images on society and it will be considered how it influences our decisions.
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It is generally agreed that media images are becoming an important and serious aspect of today's life .thousands of them are found every where and they are available to everybody. People absorb media images from television, magazines, internet, and newspaper or even on billboards and video games. Undoubtedly, media images are powerful because they affect our expectations, attitudes or even our social convention moreover, they have narrowed our notions since people use media frequently.(Sam Femanio and marck Nickerson, media &values magazine ,1999).thereby, what need to be awarded is that the most of our decisions, beliefs, and values are based on what we know for a fact and how we have put our trust on the mass media. However, we should know how media and its images really work. It is often argued that the mass media and its images have had negative on our life both in terms of the mentally and physically and also there has been a little discussion about whether they should be controlled or not. However, this essay will examine the influence of media images on society and it will be considered how it influences our decisions.
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3 comments:
As ur suggestion, I found some grammar mistakes, hope it is useful for u before submitting.
.thousands of them are found every where and they are available to every body
--> Thousands (capital T)...and available ( i think we can delete "they are")
It is better to begin 'Moreover' in a new sentence, after a full stop; or u can use ",moreover,".
every body--> everybody
more over--> moreover
both in terms of --> i think it is better to use one of them, don't use "both" and " in terms of" at the same time. I am not sure it is correct. Or u can check with Steve.
and also there has been ..I think u should have a new sentence. It is better on grammar aspect.
The 2 last sentences, i think it is not ok when u use "however". I think the aims of essay should be 2 aims. Urs is 3.
U use "however" 2 times in ur introduction. I don't think it is used much introduction, just used in paragraphs after introduction.
just what i think. I hope it is useful 4 u.
C u tomorrow. Don't worried too much. goodnight.:-)
Nice effort Mr. Coach :)
see u tomorow :)
Sheraz
You will find out soon that English is easier than tennis ;-)...Siri
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